nice colouring

dude seriously those sound files are atrocious they dont match at all some are poor quality some crisp and clear ... thats really a poor effort dude bet you rushed it

and that flash work leaves a lot to be desired

you should've used speech bubbles you buffoon tsk tsk

cool, i think you could do it much better.

Good effort.
The colors look good, but you could put some more focus on your texturing skills, like light absorbing (dulling) clothing fabrics, shiny metal, etc.

One other piece of advice.
Kill the sound effect.
It's annoying, instead of being a nice nod to the cartoon.

I wish I could color like you, though.
I'm severely Photoshopically challenged at the moment.

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Colours good, and though i loath to ever agree with bern on anything, dear god turn OFF the sound effects, they are bloody awful!

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Y'know what, I like it. I think the only problems are that the page-turn sound bite needs to have it's volume cut in half, and though some comments are interactive, they don't actually form a story. Other than that, I think it was great, and the art work is amazing.

I think the idea is ingenius and it has potential. Imagine taking the original Marvel comics, wiping out the dialogue bubbles and having Peter Cullen & Frank Welker actually reading the lines as you click on their characters. That'd be awesome. Serious potential here people. It'd take online comic reading to a whole new level. Actually, if you think about it, it's sorta like books on tape, while you're looking at the pictures. It's perfect for lazy readers like me. I guess you could say Cine-Manga is kinda doing the reverse, by taking stills of the show and putting in dialogue bubbles.

Anyways, well done.

Fiend6669

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Absolutely BRILLIANT!

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Love that line!

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